Forum Overview :: Article Submissions :: Re: Psi-Ops (actual review, sadly sans screenshots)

[quote name="Proofreader"]Almost every paragraph leans on a Caltrops / OMM reference. When the meaning isn't obvious from context and not important enough to merit a link, you should scrap it. Schilling, not Shilling careen, not kareem, and you may have meant carom. alternative, not alternate "You eagerly anticipated HL2 mod" Your "and general act bored" generally "The devs swear that like Quake 1's rocket jumping," put comma before like. "There's other powers" They're [/quote]