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[quote name="Bill Dungsroman"][quote name="What village do you live in?"]In the first paragraph, the comparisons are actually complete sentences in themselves (you know, with verbs and objects). Maybe a semicolon between the "Trespasser" and the "Thief" sentence.[/quote]Or, use the conunction "and," as I suggested. Just a comma (as Worm had it) is too clunky. Your suggestion is fine, too; so is mine. [quote name="What village do you live in?"]I mean, if you're going to "edit," then edit.[/quote] I "did." Additionally, I'm sure you spent a long time trying to find an editing error on my part for your retarded little snipe, and the best you could come up with was an artistic variation? Fuck off back to nowhere, loser.[/quote]