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This computer doesn't take coins. by Montage 02/24/2005, 7:04am PST
But thanks. Your handjob will arrive within 6-8 business days.

Casual observer wrote:

Somewhat tired premise. This subject matter was explored and exhausted since Jules Verne decided to invent the Electric Rifle. Even (heh) Shirow has dealt with this over and over. As for the structure, you have the propensity to try to bring emphasis through two means - repetition and a single word floating unattached from sentences... That just... doesn't work.
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The Happiness Act. (comments/advice will be appreciated/handjobbed) by Montage 02/20/2005, 2:02am PST NEW
    Zseni, just stop by Bill Dungsroman 02/20/2005, 7:00am PST NEW
        Re: Zseni, just stop by Casual observer 02/20/2005, 11:01am PST NEW
            Having seen "The Scream" makes someone a pseudo-intellectual? by Fullofkittens 02/20/2005, 11:35am PST NEW
                Not to mention that there is several of them. NT by Chairman Mao 02/20/2005, 2:40pm PST NEW
                    Muntz's Scream you monkeys. NT by Casual observer 02/20/2005, 4:05pm PST NEW
                        OH YEAH. by Chairman Mao 02/20/2005, 4:34pm PST NEW
                        Goddamn, you're illiterate. NT by Fullofkittens 02/20/2005, 5:04pm PST NEW
            I liked it better when you didn't think you were a regular by Choson 02/20/2005, 11:43am PST NEW
            This computer doesn't take coins. by Montage 02/24/2005, 7:04am PST NEW
        Why would someone pretend to be me to reply with that? by Bill Dungsroman 02/21/2005, 2:11pm PST NEW
 
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