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Re: Nocturnal light illumines a bed of leaves, shed from the visiting moon . . . by up with pod people 02/24/2003, 2:31pm PST
Zseni wrote:

{Jane} Irvine: *leans back, easily convinced, and flings the rest of the clothes unfolded into the laundry basket* You're damned convincing, Almasy.
{A_____} revealed?

Zseni wrote:

God I love them. Get them out of the actual real life kitchens and laundry rooms and what do they do? They go right back, only dressed up like pretty boys. I may never understand why. Nothing in this segment could have failed to happen in real life except that they're all in a good mood and the bottom-most scrapings of my pickup line bin are sufficient to score me ass and eggs within five minutes of each other.
Virtual ass and virtual eggs, but both offered freely and without reservation (from a virtual kitchen). I must say I'm enjoying this series quite a bit, and it sure doesn't look like there's a lot of editing to do, but I will lay a pair of eyes on the first draft presently.
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        My best friend is the toilet. Can I write for it instead? -nt- NT by laudablepuss 02/23/2003, 4:21am PST NEW
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    Loved it. by Clarence 02/23/2003, 8:20am PST NEW
        Re: Loved it. by Zseni 02/24/2003, 5:36am PST NEW
    Nocturnal light illumines a bed of leaves, shed from the visiting moon . . . by Mr. Palomar 02/23/2003, 11:27am PST NEW
        Re: Nocturnal light illumines a bed of leaves, shed from the visiting moon . . . by Zseni 02/24/2003, 5:56am PST NEW
            Re: Nocturnal light illumines a bed of leaves, shed from the visiting moon . . . by up with pod people 02/24/2003, 2:31pm PST NEW
                Re: Nocturnal light illumines a bed of leaves, shed from the visiting moon . . . by Zseni 02/24/2003, 3:12pm PST NEW
    FitM 6 comments by up with pod people 02/24/2003, 3:37pm PST NEW
        Yeah, good points. by Zseni 02/24/2003, 5:02pm PST NEW
            Nothing exciting happens around here. by Fussbett 02/24/2003, 6:12pm PST NEW
    Not really much to add by Entropy Stew 02/24/2003, 4:00pm PST NEW
        Re: Not really much to add by Zseni 02/24/2003, 4:37pm PST NEW
    Re: FitM 6 [first editing draft] (long) by conflictNo 02/24/2003, 4:33pm PST NEW
        Re: FitM 6 [first editing draft] (long) by Zseni 02/24/2003, 5:15pm PST NEW
    Some off-list comments. by Zseni 02/24/2003, 6:02pm PST NEW
        I AGREE WITH THE LAST PART by Jhoh Creexul 02/24/2003, 6:09pm PST NEW
            Here's a bonus quote for all you Creexul fans. by Jhoh Creexul 02/24/2003, 6:27pm PST NEW
        Link is fine by Senor Barborito 02/24/2003, 7:26pm PST NEW
    REPOST with minor edits, thx to the Rear Admiral. by Zseni 02/24/2003, 7:13pm PST NEW
        BTW by Senor Barborito 02/24/2003, 7:35pm PST NEW
        Fuck you. Also: DA REAL DEAL by Zseni 02/24/2003, 7:39pm PST NEW
            YOU LOSE, FAGGOT -nt- NT by Entropy Stew 02/24/2003, 7:46pm PST NEW
            Stew is just playing, everyone. by Zseni 02/24/2003, 7:46pm PST NEW
                I probably rubbed off on him when I talked to him earlier. by Jhoh Creexul 02/24/2003, 7:53pm PST NEW
                Fuck you and your inability to perform simple string substitutions -nt- by Rear Admiral Stew 02/24/2003, 7:59pm PST NEW
 
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