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by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 11:24pm PST |
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Ray, of Light wrote:
Jhoh Creexul wrote:
I prefer my bad grammar to GOOD grammar. Good grammar does not sound mean enough.
WHAT DO YOU THINK
I tried to preserve as much of that as possible, but sometimes the rough, rogueish charm crosses the line, into "not making sense" territory.
Even if you don't like any of the syntax changes, at least consider spelling "platitudes" and "windshields" correctly.
Ray!
I fixed up a bunch of that shit myself. The parts that just don't make sense have been changed to make sense. The parts that barely make sense though are trademarks of ME.
Anyway yeah, I did notice that a few things in the review really were fucked up beyond the point of making any sense at all, and I caught the spelling errors. THANK YOU EDITING FRIENDS ^_^ |
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My Xenosaga review. by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 6:57pm PST 
A+ by Zseni 03/05/2003, 7:07pm PST 
Re: A+ [adjusted grade inside] by Ray, of Light 03/05/2003, 8:27pm PST 
I always like it better my way. :( by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 8:58pm PST 
Re: I always like it better my way. :( by Ray, of Light 03/05/2003, 10:45pm PST 
Indeed, see below post. by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 11:24pm PST 
Re: My Xenosaga review. by Panties Stew 03/05/2003, 7:21pm PST 
Re: My Xenosaga review. by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 7:25pm PST 
genre spcialist??? by FABIO 03/05/2003, 10:11pm PST 
^__^ Wetting my panties with glee! (nt) NT by Cyannies 03/05/2003, 7:26pm PST 
I sure am good at doing that! (nt) NT by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 7:27pm PST 
This should go online very soon so it's all current and shit. by Fussbett 03/05/2003, 7:30pm PST 
Yes I do by Ice Cream Jonsey 03/05/2003, 8:34pm PST 
Playing editor by creativepig 03/05/2003, 9:30pm PST 
Damn you, Ray(!). (nt) by creativepig 03/05/2003, 9:33pm PST 
Re: Playing editor by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 9:40pm PST 
Re: Playing editor by creativepig 03/05/2003, 9:55pm PST 
Re: Playing editor by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 10:20pm PST 
Re: Playing editor by Barbara Leigh 03/05/2003, 10:23pm PST 
Re: Playing editor by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 10:27pm PST 
(I thought it was adorned too) (nt) by Ray, of Light 03/05/2003, 10:37pm PST 
Bitew Ray and pig. by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 10:46pm PST 
Okay, here are the changes I want (so far). by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 11:21pm PST 
Candifist says I misspelled villian or villain or whatever the fuck. by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 11:30pm PST 
Aren't You mything something? by Mr. Palomar 03/06/2003, 12:07am PST 
Re: Aren't You mything something? by FABIO 03/06/2003, 12:22am PST 
I'm The Shinji In FABIO's Mind by Mr. Palomar 03/06/2003, 12:54am PST 
That's right, I totally forgot about that. by Jhoh Creexul 03/06/2003, 2:06am PST 
Re: My Xenosaga review. by resha999 04/23/2008, 8:07am PDT 
http://www.caltrops.com/review0012.php NT by review0012.php 04/23/2008, 8:53am PDT 
Re: http://www.caltrops.com/review0012.php by Jhoh Creebul, Witch Toucher O_O 04/23/2008, 11:56am PDT 
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