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Indeed, see below post. by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 11:24pm PST
Ray, of Light wrote:

Jhoh Creexul wrote:

I prefer my bad grammar to GOOD grammar. Good grammar does not sound mean enough.

WHAT DO YOU THINK


I tried to preserve as much of that as possible, but sometimes the rough, rogueish charm crosses the line, into "not making sense" territory.

Even if you don't like any of the syntax changes, at least consider spelling "platitudes" and "windshields" correctly.

Ray!


I fixed up a bunch of that shit myself. The parts that just don't make sense have been changed to make sense. The parts that barely make sense though are trademarks of ME.

Anyway yeah, I did notice that a few things in the review really were fucked up beyond the point of making any sense at all, and I caught the spelling errors. THANK YOU EDITING FRIENDS ^_^
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My Xenosaga review. by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 6:57pm PST NEW
    A+ by Zseni 03/05/2003, 7:07pm PST NEW
        Re: A+ [adjusted grade inside] by Ray, of Light 03/05/2003, 8:27pm PST NEW
            I always like it better my way. :( by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 8:58pm PST NEW
                Re: I always like it better my way. :( by Ray, of Light 03/05/2003, 10:45pm PST NEW
                    Indeed, see below post. by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 11:24pm PST NEW
    Re: My Xenosaga review. by Panties Stew 03/05/2003, 7:21pm PST NEW
        Re: My Xenosaga review. by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 7:25pm PST NEW
        genre spcialist??? by FABIO 03/05/2003, 10:11pm PST NEW
    ^__^ Wetting my panties with glee! (nt) NT by Cyannies 03/05/2003, 7:26pm PST NEW
        I sure am good at doing that! (nt) NT by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 7:27pm PST NEW
    This should go online very soon so it's all current and shit. by Fussbett 03/05/2003, 7:30pm PST NEW
        Yes I do by Ice Cream Jonsey 03/05/2003, 8:34pm PST NEW
    Playing editor by creativepig 03/05/2003, 9:30pm PST NEW
        Damn you, Ray(!). (nt) by creativepig 03/05/2003, 9:33pm PST NEW
        Re: Playing editor by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 9:40pm PST NEW
            Re: Playing editor by creativepig 03/05/2003, 9:55pm PST NEW
                Re: Playing editor by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 10:20pm PST NEW
                Re: Playing editor by Barbara Leigh 03/05/2003, 10:23pm PST NEW
                    Re: Playing editor by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 10:27pm PST NEW
            (I thought it was adorned too) (nt) by Ray, of Light 03/05/2003, 10:37pm PST NEW
        Bitew Ray and pig. by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 10:46pm PST NEW
    Okay, here are the changes I want (so far). by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 11:21pm PST NEW
        Candifist says I misspelled villian or villain or whatever the fuck. by Jhoh Creexul 03/05/2003, 11:30pm PST NEW
    Aren't You mything something? by Mr. Palomar 03/06/2003, 12:07am PST NEW
        Re: Aren't You mything something? by FABIO 03/06/2003, 12:22am PST NEW
            I'm The Shinji In FABIO's Mind by Mr. Palomar 03/06/2003, 12:54am PST NEW
        That's right, I totally forgot about that. by Jhoh Creexul 03/06/2003, 2:06am PST NEW
    Re: My Xenosaga review. by resha999 04/23/2008, 8:07am PDT NEW
        http://www.caltrops.com/review0012.php NT by review0012.php 04/23/2008, 8:53am PDT NEW
            Re: http://www.caltrops.com/review0012.php by Jhoh Creebul, Witch Toucher O_O 04/23/2008, 11:56am PDT NEW
 
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