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| Hmmm by Senor Barborito 04/28/2003, 4:52am PDT | ||||
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| Not one of your better ones, in my opinion - you overdid it on the foreshadowing and I knew exactly how it was going to end when the old lady said she lost her husband.
I really like your work, but this reads like something I would write, and I'm not a writer. --SB |
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I'm really tired of making up titles. by 04/28/2003, 4:29am PDT  Hmmm by 04/28/2003, 4:52am PDT Re: Hmmm by 04/28/2003, 12:52pm PDT Re: I'm really tired of making up titles. by 04/28/2003, 5:42am PDT Jackoff, finish Super Monkey Ball again just STOP POSTING THIS SHIT NT by 04/28/2003, 8:52am PDT Re: I'm really tired of making up titles. by 04/28/2003, 12:54pm PDT |
