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Good. Needs pictures. by Fussbett 05/02/2003, 9:54am PDT
Do you have a scanner or digital camera? Some picture suggestions (including pics to steal off the net) include:

Rem Koolhaas (unflattering as possible)
pg. 118 of Mutations (a must)
A Koolhaas building
A Lloyd Wright building
Cargo shipping container (bonus if lived in)
Cargo shipping container containing War on Terrorism prisoners who are not protected under the Geneva Convention

Analysis of the bad paragraph. You introduce us stupids to two new jokeless cool things (nanotech architecture, "smart" buildings), don't elaborate on either, and get directly to your punchline. The tie-in is that you're full of rage, I suppose. Can instead you illustrate how your building-eating creation leads to the $4 million book deal and prestigious speaking engagements?

Did anyone here read word.com's "Work" articles back in the day? They were great. Everyone who can write good-like should make an article about their field. This article leads by example. I'll follow suit one day, and you'll all learn the epic tale of making drop shadows in Photoshop.
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1st-and-a-half draft. by conflictNo 05/02/2003, 1:12am PDT NEW
    Good. Needs pictures. by Fussbett 05/02/2003, 9:54am PDT NEW
        of tits NT by FABIO 05/02/2003, 1:44pm PDT NEW
    Good job by junior allen 05/02/2003, 1:57pm PDT NEW
    Love it apart from the last paragraph NT by Entropy Stew 05/02/2003, 3:49pm PDT NEW
    All noted. I'll polish it up some more later tonight. NT by conflictNo 05/02/2003, 9:11pm PDT NEW
        Fantastic. Your cock is a 96 oz. Big Gulp of jism. NT by Bin th er t c 05/03/2003, 8:08am PDT NEW
    Where is conflictNo? by Fussbett 05/18/2003, 4:50pm PDT NEW
        Re: Where is conflictNo? by Lizard_King 05/18/2003, 5:07pm PDT NEW
            Far be it from me to agree with Lizard_King... by Chairman Mao 05/20/2003, 2:07pm PDT NEW
    Diane Keaton laughs at Lisa Kudrow's knowledge of architecture by Fussbett 06/19/2003, 1:10pm PDT NEW
        Lisa Kudrow: Dumb Like A Fox! NT by Us Magazine 06/20/2003, 7:22pm PDT NEW
    Technically, this is "later", so shutup, BDR! by conflictNo 07/17/2003, 1:33am PDT NEW
        This is the best rant I've read in Idontknowhowlong by Entropy Stew 07/17/2003, 1:48am PDT NEW
            Re: This is the best rant I've read in Idontknowhowlong by conflictNo 07/17/2003, 1:55am PDT NEW
                At least you did-n't de-volve in-to com-ple-te insanery NT by Entropy Stew 07/17/2003, 2:19am PDT NEW
        I don't think this needs pics by foogla 07/17/2003, 5:12am PDT NEW
            No, it's real, I've got the pics. NT by Fussbett 07/17/2003, 5:48am PDT NEW
        This: by Fullofkittens 07/17/2003, 10:57am PDT NEW
            Seriously. That's Erik-level funny right there NT by Entropy Stew 07/17/2003, 2:50pm PDT NEW
            Flawless victory. Good job, cN. NT by Ice Cream Jonsey 07/17/2003, 4:50pm PDT NEW
            Terry Tate, Architect! by Bill Dungsroman 07/18/2003, 11:45am PDT NEW
    This. by conflictNo 08/05/2003, 2:06pm PDT NEW
        I always cover my dome with foil by Entropy Stew 08/05/2003, 4:40pm PDT NEW
        CNN's OFFBEAT NEWS: Where anything is a story! NT by Fussbett 08/05/2003, 5:08pm PDT NEW
 
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