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[quote name="Colonel K"][quote name="mrs. johnson"]The feeling of coherent tone is missing here because it is less a story than a convoluted social commentary. There is no plot, I suppose. the mrs.[/quote] Agreed, but I didn't always follow the direction of the commentary. Raising my hands, lowering my horn-rimmed glasses and making big faggy air quotes to say "direction", and "narrative voice". I liked what you were saying, I just wasn't sure where you were going with it and I lost interest at key points. [/quote]