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Re: Prelude to orc rape. by Bananadine 03/03/2010, 6:51am PST
Jhoh Creexul (custom software) wrote:

Also, we go into ORC SOCIETY where orc women are killed if they do not marry. So far the only thing I can say about this webcomic is that the guy who does it apparently knows how to foreshadow, and he apparently creates a character with a future plan to reveal a plot twist. It's just the art and story itself that suck. ^_^


I skim a couple dozen of these whenever you link one, and I'm actually starting to like this guy. It's hard to take the strip seriously for more than a few pages in a row, because it's so shallowly written and awkwardly drawn, but--there doesn't seem to be much wrong with it beyond that. He dabbles in Mary Sue stuff, but avoids the overbearing angst of Megatokyo or Two Kinds or whatever. He likes anime, but not enough to fill his comic with technofetishism and pensive adolescents. His characters aren't overly sexy, and they don't universally avoid actually having sex. The humor isn't snarky and doesn't try to be cool or clever. There aren't pop culture references everywhere. And the author doesn't think he's better than you are--unless you actually did something bad to somebody.

It seems like Mookie is just a sweet, dopey nerd who deeply enjoys justice and love and puns and epic fantasy. He is cute! He's like Piers Anthony, only less autistic.
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Well I read all of the Two Kinds archives, I think I'll read Dominick Deegan. ^_ by Creexuls, a monster >:3 09/05/2009, 6:38pm PDT NEW
    Some more. ^_^ by Creexuls, a monster >:3 09/05/2009, 7:15pm PDT NEW
    what's better, a funny comic with low quality drawings, or megatokyo? by Weyoun Voidbringer 09/05/2009, 7:35pm PDT NEW
    Re: Well I read all of the Two Kinds archives, I think I'll read Dominick Deega by Creexuls, a monster >:3 09/23/2009, 10:29pm PDT NEW
        Mary sue. by Creexuls, a monster >:3 09/24/2009, 12:17am PDT NEW
        Everyone who ever does anything bad to Dominic dies an incredibly gory death. NT by Mischief Maker 09/24/2009, 5:28am PDT NEW
            I do not enjoy reading dominic deegan BLARG NT by Weyoun Voidbringer 09/24/2009, 5:46am PDT NEW
        His little brother goes super sayjin from getting kissed? by Worm 09/24/2009, 10:21am PDT NEW
    The beginning of the more serious plotlines. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/12/2010, 4:59pm PST NEW
        Noses? Their ears look like little beans! by Bananadine 02/12/2010, 5:24pm PST NEW
        are they noses or are they the number 7? NT by irony 02/12/2010, 9:47pm PST NEW
    What manner of spellwolfery is this? by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/12/2010, 5:43pm PST NEW
    This is almost like Battlefield Earth bad. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/12/2010, 6:00pm PST NEW
    Dominic's good guy brother SHAMES some JOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/15/2010, 10:29pm PST NEW
        He must've just made these comics after being called a fag. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/15/2010, 10:30pm PST NEW
            IN WHICH IT COMES TO BE that the words "stupid jocks" actually appear. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/15/2010, 10:32pm PST NEW
        Re: Dominic's good guy brother SHAMES some JOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOCKS!!! by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/15/2010, 11:45pm PST NEW
            SHIT JUST GOT REAL by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/15/2010, 11:45pm PST NEW
                Rachel Hart, man NT by Rachel Hart: man? 02/15/2010, 11:47pm PST NEW
        haha holy fuck it's like a self parody NT by irony 02/16/2010, 7:46am PST NEW
    Dominic in love with the orc girl awwwwwww. ^_^ by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/17/2010, 8:27pm PST NEW
    Possibly one of the most pointless Dommdfn Deegin subplots ever. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/18/2010, 12:52am PST NEW
    The dumb jock is finally killed violently. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/27/2010, 11:28am PST NEW
        Also. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/27/2010, 6:14pm PST NEW
    DRAMATIC by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/27/2010, 11:47am PST NEW
    Dominic basically becomes god. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/27/2010, 12:34pm PST NEW
        Now Dominic uses his powers of being god to make his brother be god. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/27/2010, 12:37pm PST NEW
        GREGORY'S MINDSCAPE! NT by Worm 02/27/2010, 12:53pm PST NEW
    They destroyed the storm of souls gg. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/27/2010, 3:28pm PST NEW
        Re: They destroyed the storm of souls gg. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/27/2010, 3:30pm PST NEW
        Four guys is not a "gang bang." NT by Noi Dau Don 02/27/2010, 5:30pm PST NEW
    Now everyone hugs and kisses and handshakes. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/27/2010, 4:05pm PST NEW
    This is all basically Ender's Fantasy Furry Game then =( NT by FABIO 02/27/2010, 5:26pm PST NEW
        Oh, MM already mentioned this in the Ender's Game thread =( NT by FABIO 02/27/2010, 5:36pm PST NEW
    Does Dominic ever actually get hired? by Bananadine 02/27/2010, 5:32pm PST NEW
        It's given up after the first 100 comics. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 02/27/2010, 6:14pm PST NEW
    I've been exposed to a lot of naked boobs by "Mookie", author of Dominic Deegan 02/28/2010, 7:40pm PST NEW
    Prelude to orc rape. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 03/02/2010, 6:41pm PST NEW
        The return of the biased right wing media conspiracy. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 03/02/2010, 7:35pm PST NEW
        Re: Prelude to orc rape. by Bananadine 03/03/2010, 6:51am PST NEW
            He makes thousands off of printed books of his comics. NT by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 03/03/2010, 6:54am PST NEW
                Even more like Piers Anthony then NT by Bananadine 03/03/2010, 7:03am PST NEW
                    No, more like Rob Liefeld. NT by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 03/03/2010, 2:16pm PST NEW
                        Re: No, more like Rob Liefeld. by motherfuckerfoodeater 03/03/2010, 3:11pm PST NEW
                            I forgot where it was mentioned in this thread, but DD sells a bunch of books. by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 03/03/2010, 5:01pm PST NEW
                    and once he made me try drugs YEA NOT QUITE THE *ANGEL* AHAHA NT by irony 03/04/2010, 9:16pm PST NEW
                        First one's got a big F on it. NT by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 03/04/2010, 9:46pm PST NEW
    Are psychic visions admissible in a court of law? by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 03/17/2010, 9:36pm PDT NEW
        maybe he should hire some kind of psychic to do his job for him NT by irony 03/19/2010, 9:10am PDT NEW
            He did: himself. O_O NT by Jhoh Creexul (custom software) 03/20/2010, 12:08am PDT NEW
    Dominixxx is not above gloating over people he has enbaldened. by Jhoh Cause..... 2 05/23/2010, 7:11am PDT NEW
        His intentions were good (like THE SISKO but douchy). by Jhoh Cause..... 2 05/23/2010, 7:23am PDT NEW
        Re: Dominixxx is not above gloating over people he has enbaldened. by mark 05/23/2010, 7:23am PDT NEW
            BRETT TAGGERTY even his name says JOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOCK NT by Jhoh Cause..... 2 05/23/2010, 7:52am PDT NEW
    You cannot count the times the last panel ends with good guy smirk, bad guy scow by Jhoh Cause..... 2 05/23/2010, 8:03am PDT NEW
    Mewl and I discuss Dominic Deegan (and also the vulpine language). ^_^ by Jhoh Cause..... 2 05/25/2010, 4:33am PDT NEW
    Dominic Deegan is like a shitty version of Hellblazer. ^_^ by Jhoh Cause..... 2 05/30/2010, 2:18pm PDT NEW
        PS Constantine is the third Cable brudda. 8) NT by Jhoh Cause..... 2 05/30/2010, 2:20pm PDT NEW
            and he is the only one we will ever acknowledge NT by Sword of Justice 05/30/2010, 5:58pm PDT NEW
    the more I think about it ol billy was right, let's kill all the lawyers and kil by Sword of Justice 10/09/2010, 4:51am PDT NEW
        KILL OUR MOOM? NT by Jrdano, the only hinted at 3rd Cabl 10/09/2010, 6:23am PDT NEW
 
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