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Honey Chile, you is got to learn brevity by I need clarification 02/15/2003, 8:13pm PST
Honey Chile, you is got to learn brevity
You talkin' nonstop, you got more adjectives than sense
You must be paid by the word
Yo' goal should be a point, not a club

Honey Chile, you is got to learn brevity
Why you got to spend so much time
Talkin' bout yo'sef when talkin' 'bout others?
Yo' goal should be to convince, not bore

Honey Chile, you is got to learn brevity
You overworkin' my ears, hear?
You know what you want to say, say it
Yo' goal should be to impress, not depress

Honey Chile, you is got to learn brevity
Take a short note from Ellroy, and Mamet
I should remember the beginning of yo' sentence when I reach the end.
Yo' goal should be epiphany, not cacophany.
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Honey Chile, you is got to learn brevity by I need clarification 02/15/2003, 8:13pm PST NEW
    Re: Honey Chile, you is got to learn brevity by Zseni 02/15/2003, 8:18pm PST NEW
        See how easy? by I need clarification 02/15/2003, 8:44pm PST NEW
            Re: See how easy? by Zseni 02/15/2003, 9:08pm PST NEW
                Ah, damn. by I need clarification 02/15/2003, 9:40pm PST NEW
 
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