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	[quote name="Bill Dungsroman"][quote name="mrs. johnson"] Are you saying there is a difference between talent and quality? I mean, I'm pretty sure most of my stuff is awful. That isn't the point. I'm trying to get better, but it is either not working, or working so slowly that I can't tell.[/quote] Are you fucking stupid? ONOS I'M NOT A BESTSELLER YET and you're still a fucking teenager? Shut the fuck up j; if you want to become a good writer, judging by your godawful, lazy attempts at such thus far, you'd better be prepared to wait a loooong fucking while. You'd better take some fucking classes. You'd better fucking get outside and do something interesting. What the fuck, do you seriously think sitting in your goddamn bedroom jerking off to pr0n and playing viddy games is going to expand your life experience base to any significant amount that would even <I>allow</I> for interesting writing? You cunt. To suitably use a generic example, Hemingway didn't sit in his mommy's basement and dream up all these wacky adventures diddling himself. Look at you writing about shit you don't have the slightest fucking clue about. Didn't I fucking tell you to write about something you know? Write about failing Biology and taking a dump, these are about the only experiences you can be considered well-versed in. [quote name="mrs. johnson"] In response to Junior Allen, I'm fine with not being liked. I would really like to produce a piece of work that can influence a large number of people. Make them feel something. Dislike or like aren't good enough. I don't know if I'm on my way to doing it, but I guess I'll keep writing and posting.[/quote] You're on your way, sort of, in the sense that you're agonizing over which ticket window to get in line for the actual journey, or whatever. Do you even realize how retarded it is to whine and gnash your teeth about how UUHH I SUXORZ and UHH WUT DO I DO when every fucking moron in the history of forever knows it's GO TO FUCKING COLLEGE? People critique your work and your responses are "I know but I'm lazy." Oh, well, there's someone destined to channel the collective unconscious down a new avenue. You're too lazy to even want to write properly, and you're bitching that you're not a superfantastical writer yet, a couple years later at best? Why fucking try to help you when that's the horseshit response we get, then you go and write something no better or worse than you wrote months ago? Who fucking cares? You ain't gonna write something worth reading for 5-10 years at best, faggot. YOU AREN'T EVEN IN YOUR 20s, YOU AREN'T A PRODIGY SON. Your path is going to be like my dick, a long and hard one. IMO, you're way too lazy and unmotivated to make it. You can try, but quit fucking complaining about it. You're 20-30 years short of being able to complain about it. [quote name="mrs. johnson"]I'm just a nice person in general; I wouldn't enjoy ripping the work of others. It's why I'm bad at this whole insult giving out game. But I will attempt to take a class at college, if my curriculum allows for one.[/quote] WTF is your curriculum? Anyway, that last sentence says it all. Give up writing, if that's your fucking attitude, because that attitude fucking sucks and is anathema to writing. Hundreds if not thousands of would-be writers love writing and spend all their waking hours trying to write something worthy, and a slack-jawed boy like you thinks he can do it with the absolute minimum of effort? Fuck off. Adding in that you're in here begging for criticism of your shitty work, giving noncommital cop-out responses to them, then whining about how you can't even do the same for others? STOP WRITING. <I>NOW.</I> Nobody needs or wants a fucking clown like you, if that's your attitude. BDR [/quote]