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[quote name="Fussbett"][quote name="Fussbett"]I named a flat rate price, pulled from guesswork, and so far my projected hours will translate into an awesome hourly wage.[/quote] After many changes and rewrites, it's now down to a mediocre hourly wage! After the first draft they told me to make it lighter and referred me to a script for a similar project that they already approved. I take a look at it, and see the only big difference is the inclusion of stuff like "Let's take a look!" and "If a picture is worth a thousand words, then our gallery says a lot!" I put that shit right into my copy! Now we're on the final round of changes. Only two words need to be changed! <em>"You'll learn more about <font color="red">unfamiliar</font>..."</em> <img src="http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/e/e0/Left.svg/112px-Left.svg.png" height="14" width="42"> "Too negative and scary. Be positive." <em>"This flexible search system <font color="red">ensures</font>..."</em> <img src="http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/e/e0/Left.svg/112px-Left.svg.png" height="14" width="42"> "Too corporate."[/quote]