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This is still ongoing! by Fussbett 11/14/2008, 3:21am PST
Fussbett wrote:

I named a flat rate price, pulled from guesswork, and so far my projected hours will translate into an awesome hourly wage.

After many changes and rewrites, it's now down to a mediocre hourly wage! After the first draft they told me to make it lighter and referred me to a script for a similar project that they already approved. I take a look at it, and see the only big difference is the inclusion of stuff like "Let's take a look!" and "If a picture is worth a thousand words, then our gallery says a lot!" I put that shit right into my copy! Now we're on the final round of changes. Only two words need to be changed!

"You'll learn more about unfamiliar..." "Too negative and scary. Be positive."

"This flexible search system ensures..." "Too corporate."
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I just submitted a first draft for my first ever freelance job of ONLY writing. by Fussbett 10/03/2008, 2:03am PDT NEW
    Protip: "IDM" beepy skippity music is made for this kind of work. NT by Fullofkittens 10/03/2008, 11:19am PDT NEW
    This is still ongoing! by Fussbett 11/14/2008, 3:21am PST NEW
 
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