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by Choson 08/21/2003, 10:38pm PDT |
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mrs. johnson wrote:
Are you saying there is a difference between talent and quality? I mean, I'm pretty sure most of my stuff is awful. That isn't the point. I'm trying to get better, but it is either not working, or working so slowly that I can't tell. In response to Junior Allen, I'm fine with not being liked. I would really like to produce a piece of work that can influence a large number of people. Make them feel something. Dislike or like aren't good enough. I don't know if I'm on my way to doing it, but I guess I'll keep writing and posting.
Thing is, for me, even though I'm giving off the dislike vibe, the actual writing causes supreme indifference in me. I don't know what exactly it is, maybe I'm stupid and need a few lead-off sentences written in standard, colloquial English instead of some high-falutin' variation of it, but your writing is a lead shield to my radiation. It has some kind of power to make me not want to read it, maybe due to the arrangement of sentences, the giant block paragraphs, the description for description's sake, the failed attempts at clever turns of phrase.
Next time you post something, I'll try my best to actually read the thing and then make some real suggestions. |
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Brew (Give this one a read, if you don't any others) by mrs. johnson 08/18/2003, 4:29am PDT 
Re: Brew (Give this one a read, if you don't any others) by Vomitbird 08/18/2003, 9:39am PDT
Re: Brew (Give this one a read, if you don't any others) by mrs. johnson 08/18/2003, 12:39pm PDT
Re: Brew (Give this one a read, if you don't any others) by Colonel K 08/19/2003, 4:13am PDT
Re: Brew (Give this one a read, if you don't any others) by mrs. johnson 08/19/2003, 6:43am PDT
Re: Brew (Give this one a read, if you don't any others) by Colonel K 08/19/2003, 7:34am PDT
Re: Brew (Give this one a read, if you don't any others) by mrs. johnson 08/19/2003, 3:53pm PDT
atrocious by K. Thor Jensen 08/19/2003, 4:49pm PDT
Back to the drawing board... NT by mrs. johnson 08/19/2003, 7:19pm PDT
Dude, grow some balls by junior allen 08/20/2003, 1:40pm PDT
Re: Dude, grow some balls by mrs. johnson 08/20/2003, 4:18pm PDT
Here's your problem by Senor Barborito 08/20/2003, 4:57pm PDT
Thomas Pynchon: competent implementor. by I need clarification 08/20/2003, 7:04pm PDT
It means get SOMETHING done and out there. Anything is better than nothing. NT by Senor Barborito 08/20/2003, 10:35pm PDT
I thought you thought nothing was worth doing unless you get it perfect NT by Entropy Stew 08/21/2003, 6:57am PDT
Yes. Noticeably I accomplish virtually nothing. I'm trying to save him from me NT by Senor Barborito 08/21/2003, 9:55am PDT
Re: Dude, grow some balls by junior allen 08/20/2003, 5:10pm PDT
Post more of these! by Roop Dirump 08/20/2003, 7:17pm PDT
Uh... by mrs. johnson 08/20/2003, 8:37pm PDT
Re: Uh... by Roop Dirump 08/21/2003, 2:33am PDT
Re: Uh... by mrs. johnson 08/21/2003, 2:48am PDT
Post less of these! by Roop Dirump 08/21/2003, 9:20am PDT
Now is the winter of your discontent. Stop being such a fucking faggot. by Bill Dungsroman 08/21/2003, 12:07pm PDT
That's actually encouraging, thanks. NT by mrs. johnson 08/21/2003, 12:20pm PDT
Re: Uh... by Choson 08/21/2003, 10:34pm PDT
Re: Uh... by mrs. johnson 08/22/2003, 4:02am PDT
Re: Uh... by Choson 08/22/2003, 4:39am PDT
Re: Uh... by mrs. johnson 08/22/2003, 5:33am PDT
Re: Uh... by Choson 08/22/2003, 5:52am PDT
Re: Uh... by mrs. johnson 08/22/2003, 7:14am PDT
Re: Uh... by junior allen 08/22/2003, 8:36am PDT
Re: Uh... by K. Thor Jensen 08/22/2003, 10:38am PDT
That's probably harder than enlarging my vocabulary. NT by mrs. johnson 08/22/2003, 3:52pm PDT
Try writing as if you're talking. NT by Senor Barborito 08/22/2003, 8:16pm PDT
Hurfl mmmphhhff sploo pfffghhht mumf murf murmf fleaghh NOWT INH THEUH FASHE NT by mrs. johnson 08/22/2003, 8:40pm PDT
That's right. In real life, I'm a homosexual and I have mouth cancer. NT by mrs. johnson 08/22/2003, 10:14pm PDT
Stop smoking cock NT by Bill Dungsroman 08/23/2003, 11:30am PDT
Sound advice for roommates everywhere NT by Entropy Stew 08/23/2003, 8:09pm PDT
You can build a million bridges, but do they call you a bridge builder? NT by Bill Dungsroman 08/24/2003, 3:15am PDT
Re: Uh... by Choson 08/21/2003, 10:38pm PDT
Please don't demonstrate basic ignorance of physics by Senor Barborito 08/19/2003, 6:46pm PDT
Not lib art actually, but yeah, you're right. I know that ain't right. NT by mrs. johnson 08/19/2003, 7:20pm PDT
Re: Brew (Give this one a read, if you don't any others) by fag packet 08/20/2003, 11:30pm PDT
Re: Brew (Give this one a read, if you don't any others) by Fussbett 08/21/2003, 2:38am PDT
Re: Brew (Give this one a read, if you don't any others) by Choson 08/21/2003, 10:42pm PDT
If you forget to flush, we'll judge the color and the density. NT by mrs. johnson 08/22/2003, 4:03am PDT
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